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Water is one of many visual images that John Cheever utilizes throughout “The Swimmer” to show Neddy Merrill’s descent into disconnection and dissociation from reality. The changing color of the water mirrors his changing emotions and reflects his status in his journey. When the story begins, Neddy is sitting at the edge of the Westerhazys’ “pale […] green” pool. When he approaches the Bunkers’, the water has turned “sapphire-colored.” Once he reaches the Recreation Center pool, the water, tainted by the existence of other individuals, turns into “murk.” The Hallorans’ pool was “opaque gold,” a more natural color to match the Hallorans’ preference to swim in the nude. Later, Neddy describes this water as “dark” and “depressing.” Once he reaches the Biswangers’, the sun has set, and their pool has “a wintry gleam” (Paragraph 33). This continuous sequence is seemingly broken by Neddy’s description of Shirley Adams’s pool, which he sees as “lighted” and “cerulean” (Paragraph 38). The sun has now set and, presumably, Shirley’s pool has underwater lights to make the water glow in the darkness.
Cheever also uses the motif of water to comment on the relationship between Neddy and his neighbors throughout “The Swimmer,” particularly through auditory imagery. At the Bunkers’, the water “refract[s] the sound of voices […] and seem[s] to suspend it in midair” (Paragraph 7). When he leaves the pool, he hears “the brilliant, watery sounds of voices fade” (Paragraph 7). Cheever’s use of the words “suspend” and “brilliant” connotes a sense of otherworldliness, as though the voices (and the characters that they belong to) are mere apparitions. When it begins to storm, Neddy remarks on the “watery notes” and the joy they bring him. Likening the thunderstorm to music reaffirms Neddy’s childlike wonder, and it is telling that he finds the thunderstorm more easily beautiful than the voices of his so-called friends. At the Recreation Center, the “illusion of brilliance and suspense” remained in the public pool—note the addition of the word “suspense,” foreshadowing the dark turn into the surreal—but now Neddy finds them “louder, harsher, and more shrill” (Paragraph 13). Faced with a large swath of people, Neddy is overwhelmed at the sound of the voices and how the water reflects and echoes them.
While Cheever never explicitly uses the word “echo” in relation to Neddy’s experience of the voices in relation to the water, this could be an additional nod to the Narcissus story; the nymph whom Narcissus rebuffs in the myth, who then curses him to a lifetime of unrequited love, is named Echo. Her godly punishment, separate from the story of Narcissus, is that she is only permitted to speak by repeating words back that are said to her.
At the beginning of the story, Neddy is figuratively compared to “a summer’s day” (Paragraph 2). This simile reflects the protagonist’s aura of “youth, sport, and clement weather” (Paragraph 2) and his effusive optimism about his self-imposed quest. His hedonistic approach to life means that every day has the promise of an idyllic summer Sunday.
In the narrative’s progression, the image of sunshine on a summer’s day gives way to images of encroaching night and the arrival of fall, symbolizing Neddy’s deteriorating physical and emotional state. As Neddy is forced to confront “unpleasant” realities, such as his financial ruin, his former mistress’s scorn, and the uncertain fate of his daughters, the atmosphere chills, the sky darkens prematurely, and there are unmistakable signs that fall has arrived. At the same time, Neddy undergoes the signs of aging, as “his legs [feel] rubbery and [ache] at the joints,” and he experiences “cold in his bones and the feeling that he might never be warm again” (Paragraph 16). The author combines pathetic fallacy and the traditional association of the human lifespan with seasons of the year to convey Neddy’s reluctant aging, his fear of mortality, and his final recognition that one’s life cannot perpetually possess the quality of a summer’s day.
Cheever uses nature, and more specifically humans’ relationship to nature, as a foil for the artificiality of the suburb and, therefore, the swimming pool. Even as early as the second paragraph, Neddy remarks on the clouds in the sky before immediately comparing them to cities. Neddy’s insistence on traveling via the handmade swimming pools instead of by the more natural roads or paths is a symbol of this community’s dwindling relationship to the world around them. The “stream” Neddy invents is not a stream at all, and the grass in the front and back yards of his neighbors is likely an artificially planted invasive species imported from the UK. Neddy hides out from the thunderstorm by making use of the manmade gazebo in the Levys’ backyard; the Welchers had nailed a “For Sale” sign to the tree at the front of their house; the patches of grass on the median of the local highway are covered in litter. Neddy is upset at the “regimentation” and artificiality of the Recreation Center pool but is unaware of the fact that this artificiality and false conveyance of nature is already all around him and is exacerbating his feelings of disconnection and alienation.
Neddy’s relationship to the world around him is also called into question with his memory loss and his emotions upon seeing the falling leaves and the autumn constellations; faced with the reality of the passage of time, proven by the trees in his neighbors’ yards and the inescapable night sky, Neddy begins to weep uncontrollably, longing for a youth and a life no longer within his reach.
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By John Cheever